Friday, November 11, 2011

Can you read my poem? Constructive Criticism Por Favor.?

I think its great!! And so true...you never know who is real anymore. And don't tone it down on the vocab...if you cant understand it then don't read it lol. The vocab adds to the depth of your poem, because its very deep and has emotional depth as well. I don't suggest anything other than have more faith in your work, you're a great poet :)

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